This week we started on making the pre-vis of the selected idea. We shared the pre-vis progress with our mentor and received the feedback.
First Variation
Here is the first variation of the first half of the pre-vis
Feedback and Improvements.
- In the establishing shot, make all the windows in the school’s building symmetrical.
- Add delays in the noticeboard sequence to make some space for narration.
- Change the angle of camera panning shot where we are showing children filling the sheets
- Add some sort of particles that shows the star portal or the character going in the star portal.
- Add some breathing space in all the animation sequences.
- Make sure all the camera transitions are smooth.
- Don’t make abrupt camera movement.
- Change the establishing shot of the star. Instead of zooming out of the star to show the platforms. Show the star from over the character’s shoulder.